Alex - you have the stuff already, although a bit raw....
Evie, Graham - I will send you a playtester copy, as soon as I have ironed out a couple of things - it's gonna be a gud un!
BTW, the song at the end is a bit of a joke!
I cannot for the life of me find an authentic version of the song - so I sucked in some helium and had a go myself!
My most ardent critic (my wife) said that the story lacks dramatic curve - and I kinda agree, so I am going to work on it a bit more.
But I am quite pleased at the moment - did you all see the blog site? Another piece of the puzzle!